Can you give me some feedback on this section of my story???

I'm probably going to be one of the only person who is going to read the whole thing, but I did. It was pretty good. I love how you use so much details in the beginning. It really keeps the reader reading. It was a pretty good story, too. I loved the end, because it makes you want to read further, because you say "I knew I found a true friend." I hope you get this book published (If that's what you want :) Good luck with everything.